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May 17th, 2001, 01:32 PM
#1
Inactive Member
That warm spring night
When you fell asleep in my arms
I laid there, holding you tight
Time stood still, everything was perfect
Everything felt right
But as the warm night
Faded into another of those spring days
Both of us knew, there was nothing we could do
Cuz we'd both soon go our seperate ways
Don't let the sun set on the possibility
Of all the good things that could happen between you and me
Don't let the moon rise on your broken heart
Since I'm not there, to finish whats yet to start
As we laid there, with the fan blowing in our hair
I recalled all those moments, that were so priceless
Like that night of our first kiss
Or how I still get butterflies
Everytime I look into your eyes
Don't cry, when I say good bye
Lets just make the best of our last day
Since we live hours away
I'll spend the summer fighting off the blues
Knowing you're mine to lose
Don't let the sun set on the possibility
Of all the good things that could happen between you and me
Don't let the moon rise on your broken heart
Since I'm not there, to finish whats yet to start
- The Truth -
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May 21st, 2001, 01:10 AM
#2
Inactive Member
I liked it alot. Made me smile, but at the same time, made me feel a bit down. But alot of things in life are like that.
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May 21st, 2001, 01:54 AM
#3
Inactive Member
good song work material...but as for me..not all my songs have to rhyme...but still a liker in my book...
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May 22nd, 2001, 03:59 PM
#4
HB Forum Owner
great man...
this is developed thought and it works for me.. nice structure and nice point
yeah
yeah
___---parch
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